Action | Location/props | Lines |
Detective is in her car driving down a dark street. She reads a document in a folder and looks at a file about the father. She talks into her tape recorder. |
(Street in Tedder avenue) Document on Father Bella’s mums car |
“0240 hours. Wednesday morning, July 13th, 2014… Potential criminal suspect has made their way to Grim Lane, goes by the name of …. “ |
Detective is hiding in the darkness. Pull focus to father who is talking to an assassin and hanging him a profile. | (Street in Tedder avenue) Document on father Document on Max Patterson |
“Max Patterson. 30 years old. Some say that he almost found our spot, so we’re suspicious. Just kill him.” |
Father gets in his car, drives away. Detective gets in her car and follows him. Slow subtle car chase | (Street in Tedder avenue) Bella’s mums car Libbys dads car |
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Establishing shots of the money being made cut between click of boss’s heels and clicking of the money being made. Detective walks in someone hands her a shirt. Detective says yes. Employer grabs her places her in a work bench. King walks in. king examines a bill and starts shouting at a employer for bad quality. Anna walks in and uses feminine charm to get the king to shop shouting at employer. |
(Basement of Bella’s parents office) | “Hurry up, you’re late. Nice disguise, but its first day in business. Learn to be more prompt.” "Don’t say a word.” |
We also established a temporary replacement name for Rumpelstiltskin... I came up with this as Libby referred to the Rumpelstiltskin lines "You know how to play the game. You must guess what is my name." and this sparked an idea to call it Playing The Game as it fits in both storylines of our film and the folk tale.
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