In class today, Bella, Minnie and I showed Mr Andrews our film so far and received some feedback to make it better. Unfortunately, Libby is at home today because she dislocated her knee and isn't able to film with us. However, we need to work around things like this. (Good thing we filmed all of her walking shots before the accident). Here are some dot points that I jotted down while Mr Andrews was watching our film.
- Shots need to flow better
- Voice over will enhance it & will give indication on how much tighter it can be
- Must record voice over ASAP
- Crop some shots in the last scene
- Guns: Add muzzle flash/BANG (photoshop)
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