The Golden Rule - Updated Version

Action (by Scene)	Props needed	Approximate Dialogue	Location ideas
Charlie is in a car driving down a dark street.  Charlie reads a document in a folder and looks at a file about The Father. Charlie write into note pad. -> Charlie puts the notepad in a briefcase and walks out into the darkness of a street to investigate Charlie is hiding in the darkness as The Father is talking to an assassin and handing him a profile. (Pull focus) -> The Father gets in his car, drives away to SpinStraw Inc. Charlie gets in their car and follows him.  Slow car chase takes place around the city	Bella’s mums car Document on Father Note pad Libby’s dad’s car	“0240 hours. Wednesday morning,  July 16th, 1958. Potential criminal suspect has made their way to Grim Lane, goes by the name of .… “ “Max Patterson. 30 years old. Some say that he almost found our spot, so we’re suspicious. Just kill him.”	Street in Tedder Avenue
Shots of fake money being printed, cuts, between click of boss’s heels and clicking of the money being made. Charlie walks in behind The Father. Radom worker throws Charlie a pair of plastic gloves and says -> Worker sits at his/her work bench. Veronica King walks in slowly, and loudly, clearly showing everyone that she’s in a bad mood.  Worker says -> Veronica examines a bill and starts shouting at a employer for bad quality. Anna walks in and uses feminine charm to get the Veronica to shop shouting at employer. She also uses feminine charm to make the employer work harder. Cut shots between Charlie's eyes and suspicious business, analysing things on the table and the environment Charlie has been thrown into.  Charlie looks over at another employee who looks sternly back at her noticing that she is not working. Anna comes and slams her hand on Charlie's desk after seeing them not doing any work. Says flirtatiously ->	Fake money Money printer(?) Plastic gloves Desk	“Hurry up, you’re late. *looks at Charlie, judging them* Nice disguise, but its first day in business. Learn to be more prompt.” “Keep still. Don’t talk.” “Hey! Get back to work.”	Basement of Bella’s parents office
Charlie gets in car, writes into note pad, then drives home. -> Charlie closes brief case with criminal files in it, gets out of car.  When Charlie gets home the door is already open and Anna is sitting in the living room sitting in a chair holding a martini.  Charlie reaches for a gun behind back for protection. Sees Anna, and quickly hides briefcase discretely. Anna uses her feminine charms to get detective to research Veronica. -> Detective eyes Anna as if to say “what the hell is she doing here, why does she need my help” then goes to pour a drink.  Anna throws detective badge at her feet to show that she knows that she is a detective working against the company. -> Charlie realises that its impossible be the good guy now. Charlie has been blackmailed to help Anna get in power or else Charlie will be assassinated.  Charlie raises glass without expression (like a Mr Darcy face lol) and sculls it knowing this will be hard. Charlie doesn't want to do this.	Martini 2 glasses Drink of some sort(?) Detective/Police badge	“July 15th, 1958. Situation and procedure hasn’t gone to plan. Criminal suspect has been identified as working for a money forging business.” “I want you to do something. You are good at what you do. Let’s see how good you really are. I’ve been in this business long enough, I live for control over it. You are going to stalk Veronica. Find out everything so… *subtle death stare* we can kill her, and easily cover it up.” “So, tell me Detective; what do you say? You know Veronica wouldn’t like the fact that you have… authoritative connections?”	Libby’s living room
Charlie is working at the company, eyes Anna. Anna eyes Charlie back. They are both working. Anna walks past and discretely puts a note on desk with coordinates and writing that says come alone.  They continue to work	Paper note w/ writing		Basement of Bella’s parents office
At the meeting place, Charlie discreetly walks past Anna “not knowing each other” and passes her a file that has Veronica’s name on it and a photo of her.	Folder with Veronica’s profile		Street in Tedder Avenue
Charlie looks at a handful of money vs his cop badge and contemplates his work as a detective as opposed to all of the money he’s making undercover	Money Cop Badge		Libby’s living room
Charlie is writing into a note pad -> During the voice over, there a lots of shots of anna and detective exchanging eye contact, papers, and files meeting at certain locations, and the king getting suspicious and starting to find clues. Anna sends people who are going to be assassinated next a ‘death ring’ and after assassination or hit, ring is returned to the company for the next person. Shots of this are shown Charlie then gets sick of having to write down everything and decides to ditch his job as a detective for SpinSraw Inc.  Charlie rips up the pages of the note pad.	Detectives car Note pad	“Detective Stilts. I’ve been working on this project for 3 months. Company Name: SpinStraw Incorporated. Founder: Veronica King. Accomplice: Anna.. Unknown sir name Detective Stilts going undercover…”	Street
Veronica walks to Anna’s desk and finds the coordinates that have been sent between Charlie and Anna Veronica decides to send a coordinate to both Charlie and Anna and they think that they have sent it to each other so they all meet at the same place.
Anna is not stupid. She later sees the coordinate and approaches Charlie. Anna says -> Anna looks up and sees Veronica. Veronica points her noise up. Anna is shocked, looks at the coordinate and realises it’s Veronica’s handwriting. Anna then says to Charlie -> Anna starts to walk away but Charlie stops her. Charlie whispers -> Charlie slightly smirks at the thought of having more money then Anna walks away while Charlie gets back to work Anna doesn’t like the idea of having Charlie there anymore Charlie then finds a ring on the desk, curiously then chucks it in their pocket.		“This isn’t your hand writing. Someone’s trying to meet up with us.” “It's Veronica’s. Our plan is going forth a bit quicker than we thought. Get ready. We’re doing this tonight” (kill Veronica.) “Hey, when you’re in charge… when we’re in charge… I’m going to get a triple raise, right?”	Basement of Bella’s parents office
Charlie is in the car and looks at the gun sitting in the front seat beside them. Charlie smirks, picks up the gun and gets out of the car.
Charlie enters the meeting coordinate to find Veronica with Anna who is holding a gun When Anna sees Charlie she holds the gun up at Charlie. Veronica is smirking in the background Charlie is confused They converse -> Veronica says -> Charlie is shocked that Anna told Veronica. Charlie knows they’re screwed and slowly pulls out the ring, Charlie is anticipates what is going to happen next, takes a deep sigh and looks up. Anna’s face is blank, still holding up the gun She says  Veronica was unaware of their plan and looks at Anna, shocked and scared of what Anna’s going to do to her. Anna shoots Detective and quickly turns around to point the gun at Veronica. Before shooting her, says -> After Shooting both Charlie and Veronica, Anna calls a number and says the them ->	C: “Anna it’s just me.” A: “I know it’s you, Charlie. Drop the gun.” C: “What are you doing?” V: “Detective, show us what’s in your pocket” A: “I said I wanted to be in charge, I didn’t want someone sharing the power with me, who do you think I am?” “God, it feels good to be powerful.” “Grim Lane, get the bodies out. Now.”	Street in Tedder Avenue
Anna walks into work with a fake smile			Basement of Bella’s parents office